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--- ayenee:character:addison_thomas [2018/10/17 16:18] – [Engineering] burgmond45
+++ ayenee:character:addison_thomas [2019/01/21 20:49] – [Alchemy] burgmond45
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 What could Thomas Addison even do now? Where can he go?
-It was in his darkest hour, his freshly fractured mind conjured an alter ego. An alter ego that would help Thomas cope and move past the tragedy, a new voice that would help him off his knees and off into the world. It may be a embodiment of chaos, but this alternate personality was Thomas's only hope left in life.
+It was in his darkest hour, his own inner parasite manifested and invaded his mind. It proposed that would help Thomas cope and move past the tragedy, a new voice that would help him off his knees and off into the world. It may have scared Tom, but what choice did the alchemist have, when there didn't appear to be anything for him anymore?
-That alter ego was Juryrig, a persona born from the chaos and pointless cruelty of Thomas's life. Juryrig proposed to Thomas a plan: "Hey buddy-o, since you are in a jam and I have a un-jam-tastic plan, how about I take the wheel for a while, and you sit in the back to get yourself sorted out?"
+"Hey buddy-o, since you are in a jam and I have a un-jam-tastic plan, how about I take the wheel for a while, and you sit in the back to get yourself sorted out?"
-Thomas agreed.
+Thomas agreed, losing himself fully to the the parasite, letting Juryrig manifest.
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 ==== Alchemy =====
-Equivalent exchange is pretty much the only rule in alchemy, for as long as costs are about equal to each other, then you could just make whatever you like. Juryrig uses this magical science as a basis for his contraptions, as well as the potions he brews on occasion. It gives access to the following:
+Equivalent exchange is pretty much the only rule in alchemy, for as long as costs are about equal to each other, then you could just make whatever you like. Juryrig uses this magical science as a basis for his contraptions, as well as the potions he brews on occasion, and even in how it functions as a parasite:
   * //Potions//- Their medical uses are varied; some offer resistances to disease, some enhance eyesight, others gift limited regeneration. All of the effects, even as he improves the duration, can't go past twenty four hours.
   * //Poison//- They are just like a potion, just a bit deadlier upon digestion/inhalation/contact.
   * //Material Transmutation//- Using a portable alchemy lab, or a Alchemical Ritual, Juryrig can transmute materials based on their "cost".
-  * //Alchemical Body Enhancements//- Over the years, Juryrig has made leaps in his studies, and unlocked the key to modifying his body alchemically to give it permanent boosts. Even though his body became stronger and more durable, Juryrig was unable to progress further due to certain hardcaps.
+  * //Alchemical Panacea-based Symbiote//- Ever since Thomas Addison became Juryrig, the alchemical parasite that lives inside him has taken over everything head to toe, losing his humanity and sanity but gaining supernatural buffs to his own body. It made him stronger in mind, in strength, and in constitution, for sure, but it being more of a living panacea in nature, the parasite converts hostile threats within Tom's body into additions to itself, bolstering an abnormal immune system.
+This greater power is disguised as disease/parasite immunity, regeneration, and infectious bodily fluids. With it becoming sentient due to it becoming attuned to Tom, there's no telling what this 'Juryrig' parasite can develop into...
 ==== Engineering ====

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