Haunting

[Vamprella Nightmagic]

I hope that I haunt your dreams, the way you haunted mine.
You think that you can just waltz back into my life after the hell you put me through?
You gave up that right when you walked out that door.
Think you now, that I would fall at your feet and worship you so adoringly
as I did before?
I was a fool to love you like I did, no sense, no rhyme nor reason
When you left, I was shattered, broken
How could you do that to me after all the things I had already been through
All the things you said to me.....
Did you mean anything you said?
Now you show up after so many years..
Why now?
Have I haunted your dreams? You no longer haunt mine
No longer do you have any hold over me, but, I see I have one on you
I hope that my voice echoes in your ears at night, the soft sound caressing you
Remember the feel of my fingers touching you....
My face entering your dreams smiling, inviting you to come to me....As you reach out for me know this that I now lay in another's arms... safe protected.... loved
Yes, I hope I haunt your dreams .......forever...

 

[Sinful Feline]

A lovely haunted kind of peice.

 

[Vamprella Nightmagic]

Thank you..... but in all actuality....I think it stunk ~laughs~ But thank you for your kind words.

 

[Mithrandirxx]

Well I liked the idea of the piece, yet the piece as a whole feels off, but it carries the emotion well. So I would say its decent.